Tuesday, June 1, 2010
ABOUT ME!
Hi, it's me Hema Bhandari. I am from Nepal, now I'm in the United States. I came in September /8/2008. Currently I'm a student of Oakland International High School. I am the one student who really wonders about something new and a hard worker. I hear a sound of hope and success. I have many dreams, goals and hopes, I see so many different things were around me, that I have to learn. I want to do better because I want my future bright. Sometimes I pretend to be better with every ones but I am still sick with some cause. I see so many things that I still have to do. I worry about my future. I cry when I see the wrong people who just wassting there time and someone hurt me. I understand every things what I have to do, what is my duty, what I am supposed to be, and who I am. Sometimes I saw good and bad things that down by myself and my friends but I am always nice with them. I dream is to achieve my goals and my distance. I try a lots to do something better in my future. I hope I can reach in my dream.
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Hema,
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful poem. I think you should put spaces between the lines so it looks more like a poem. Look at some other students' blogs for examples of this.
Good work!
Ms. Julie G.
I think of the same way with Ms. Julie. Give some spaces!!! I like your poem!!!
ReplyDeletehi hema i like ur blog it is cool keep it up .......
ReplyDeleteall I can say is "WOW.
ReplyDeletewhat you wrote is just great!
one thing...what is your dream..?